Wednesday, September 21, 2016

my married story about a men and a lady.

Once upon a time there was a lady and she was getting married. She didn't like the man she was going to marry, so she ran away. She couldn't run in her high heels so she took it off and left it behind. well she was  running she tripped over and fall in the mud she rallised  that she would marry
 marry him so she did and lived happily ever after

2 comments:

  1. Eve, you have some good ideas about the problem and solution. Keep it up!

    Next steps - you need to add more detail. What lady was getting married? What was her name? What was she like? Who was the man? What was his name? Were they in love? Why didn't she want to marry him? What was she wearing at the wedding? What kind of high heels did she take off? What did she trip over? What made her realise she did really want to marry the man?

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  2. Eve,I love how you used some great ideas keep it up!!Ka Pai

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