Holiday trip

WALT:Adding speech.

Introduction: On Saturday the 8’th at 4:00pm my
family and I had a meeting about going to Taranaki to
celebrate my cousins birthday.

Firstly: we packed our suitcases then we went to grab
some snacks from Countdown to eat on the road trip
down to Taranaki. The snacks we got was pods, Chocolate,
cheese flavored doritos, my baby sisters milk  and three
drinks.

Secondly: on the trip I saw the mountain with snow on it,
a river, tents, caravans, animals,houses and a marai to
sleep in.

Thirdly: Well we were in the van I ate my chocolate and
chips and it was delicious and tasty. We were 30mins
away and I fell asleep because the road trip was very

Last of all: I felt really excited because I was going to see
my family from wellington and it was going to be my
first time in a hotel.